Teacher feedback

Hello group 8
Here is feedback from me (Rebecca) for Shpresa and Jenny (who I am monitoring).

Shpresa: you have completed the research, which is great, but I would like to see better use of ICT in your blog posts.  There are some that don't contain any ICT at all - for example, the blog looking at the appeal of music videos to audiences.  Remember that each post must include some form of ICT.  Try not to rely too heavily on embedded videos - if you do find yourself embedding a video make sure that you put the timings of the clip that want us to focus on (or better still use Camtasia to grab the bit of the video you are looking at).  You research on Goodwin and Vernallis is really good - I'm please particularly with these blogs.
I would now like to see blogging around the planning - there's nothing this week posted!

Jenny: Try to blog off the task sheet more - remember the guide on the front that says in order to get a really high mark you need to blog off task.  Again - make sure that if you are embedding videos that we are directed to which bit of the video you want us to watch, rather than just bunging in a whole video.  
There isn't any planning blogged yet - remember that you should be blogging every week....

Keep up the great work.

Umar and Farha - Dan will give you your feedback - just ask.

Rebecca