Pitch Review

Pitch Feedback!

Our Pitch went well altogether, it was really helpful because we had an audience who could tell us what they love about our idea and what they think would work, however they could also give us positive criticism, if theres something the audience thought wouldn't work we took that into account as well. 

What went well?
We introduced our concept and explained how it fits in with our chosen song and our audience liked the idea and thought it would work well, with this we clearly explained our initial ideas for our video and where they came from by showing which existing videos influenced us the most.
Our audience was thought through carefully so this made it easy for us to explain to our teacher and peers who exactly our music video audience is and in what ways our video will appeal to them. 

Improvements?
After a discussion about our setting and location, as a group we decided to change one of our location which was to film in Angel at a road crossing because we decided this wouldn't work as the area will be busy at all times with students from nearby colleges going to college and home, not to mention the busy roads. We also need to think about adding more locations to our video, just to make it more interesting. 
Another important improvement we need to make as a group is our animatic storyboard because it wasn't clear enough to our audience, they didn't understand our locations properly and were unsure of where our artist will be singing. 
We also have decided to change the costume of our artist and mystery man from casual wear to something more smart just to add a sense of realism to the music video.